Immersion rant!!!
Please stop with all these immersion breaks…
Like most I want to immerse myself into new worlds to “escape” life for a while, but I’m constantly annoyed by some authors.
F-Tier, E-Tier and so on for power ranks. Come on! Create your own! It’s generic and reminds of the 50 other novels I’ve read.
Adventure Guild. There’s always one. Now beside the lack of actual sense they make (they don’t have any in a “real world”), just name it differently or create your own thing.
The cardinal sin. “McDaniel”, “Burger Queen”, … I won’t even comment on that. Just delete your books.
Dumb decisions. Be it the MC or the side characters or the villains. If you are not smart enough to write a intelligent MC than don’t. And please for the love of god, DON’T make everyone stupid so the MC may be the one eyed king in the land of the blind.
Thank your for listening to my rant. I hope you enjoyed! Do you have any other immersion breaks you want to add? So we may warn future authors?